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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 8:40 pm | |
| I can't see that pic, but I'm gonna assume it's a trollface or something similar to it.
And I can't answer your question, Kiwi, because I don't mark a calender about these things. But last time we talked about a plot, Member said that she, Kiwi, and Snick all agreed to change the plot. When I said the changes were fucking stupid, Member got defensive and started changing the story about how everybody agreed with it and how you personally went over it with everybody. Then you just spouted off more bullshit, but by that time I had just stopped caring and didn't bother to remember any of it. And Kiwi, you just went along with whatever bullshit was being said. You told me to check with Rambo to prove you two had gone over it with him. I didn't, because although I didn't know which controversial statement to believe, I still trusted you guys. A few days passed, the plot was brought up again, and lo and behold, Rambo wasn't aware of any of the changes. I don't trust either of you anymore, and any serious stuff you say I'm just going to assume is a lie. But that's not the point and we need to make some progress. | |
| | | kiwiattack
Posts : 512 Join date : 2010-06-26 Age : 27 Location : @ the combination pizza hut & taco bell
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 8:51 pm | |
| I did talk to Rambo about it. I don't know why he didn't say so. Probably because it wasn't over EVERY SINGLE ASPECT EVER of the plot. ]I never meant to purposefully deceive anyone, alright? If I ever lied about anything it was because I was either blindly agreeing because I didn't give a fuck at the time or because I was confused. Also, here's the plot so you could KNOW WHAT WAS HAPPENING. It's long and I would totally tl;dr this but since I posted it no one can bitch about anything being kept from them. - Spoiler:
Aw snap. Revised version! The brackets were a bit of an eyesore, so I put a planet name in there. It can totally be changed to whatever anyone wants though. Also holycrap I really hate the name Sitkva. And this thing is really long and would probably take at least a couple years IC, feel free to shorten that up! Nothing good lasts forever. In this case, that good thing is Station Two. Not that Jairus isn’t a good enough leader, he’s definitely much better than the tyrant Lenina, it’s just impossible to keep the station running in its current state. The thing brought in no profit and cost too much. The ONA couldn’t afford to keep supporting it without great repercussions, so they were forced to drop it, resulting in the humans being relocated and the station dismembered. With Sigma gone, there remained few that were sympathetic to the human’s plight. However, there would be one last act of kindness to them. Meet the planet of Sitkva. It’s located light years away, just a little past the edge of the galaxy. Sitkva is the only planet in its solar system, which is held together by an odd form of neutron star. Only by the grace of God was the planet allowed to survive its place next to such a dangerous entity. Because of the odd conditions in which the planet is placed, the people have evolved in a very peculiar way. No species other than the Sitkvian natives can survive there. All of the Siktvian’s off-planet affairs are taken care of by extremely advanced robots, or by paid ambassadors of other species. While no planet is exactly friendly towards them (most are cautious), the governments of Varsia and Fandor 6 regularly take care of business for them. Sitkvians are rarely seen or heard of by anyone else, although they’ve played a few important points in history. Their military is assumed to be highly advanced, but no one can really know for sure. Due to their location and strange planetary conditions they haven’t had any major skirmishes throughout their history. They occasionally come to meddle in the affairs of other species, but for some reason aren’t met with much backlash. The humans were sent to Gertragia by the council of this mysterious planet to live out the rest of their days in peace. Mostly. Hopefully. But probably not. And the council of Sitkva knew this. No one is exactly sure why the Siktvian’s would do such a thing, especially since it’s unlikely that Gertragia would appreciate it. Before the humans were to go, they were given small tracking devices by some of the Siktvian’s robotic helpers. It’s not like they would let super-powered monkeys run around such a tumultuous planet completely unchecked. But then again, the humans are few in numbers, neutralizing the threat for the most part. Also, a small number of them would be kept. Just a few. Four to be exact. These four would be subjected to experimentation to find out the nature of their powers in a small private facility, perhaps the one owned by Deus Dormio. It was a small condition to take for survival of their brethren, and the council would have no resistance. They would be released as soon as the necessary information was obtained, and were to be treated humanely for the most part. There are already problems for the other humans, even on arrival. What’s left of Gertragia’s government is outraged. A party of less than 50 arriving on the planet would normally be of no importance, but when the party is made up of hormonal, trouble attracting, highly sought over creatures that bring trouble wherever they go, then it’s a problem. Immediately after landing, the Gertragian Loyalist government takes the humans into custody, against the plans of the Sitkvians, who have unfortunately retreated back to their home at the edge of the galaxy. The Sitkvian tracking devices are disabled and replaced with Gertragian ones that wouldn’t give the Sitkvian’s any feedback as to the humans’ locations. The humans are kept in a lightly guarded (as that's the best the Gertragians can do) compound in a small northern city for several weeks, their powers dampened by heavy amounts of hagar radiation, until finally an escape plan is made. Eventually, they burst from the compound and run into the night, with only the sound of sirens behind them. Over the next few months the humans live as refugees, although they’re apprehension is not made a priority. Gertragia’s more worried about the ever growing rebel army that seems to be sympathetic towards the humans, or at least neutral. Then the Sitkvians come back. The research has proved fruitful. The secret to the humans’ powers has been isolated. The four guinea pigs are dropped off, but with the charge of finding the rest of the humans and leading them their capture. The Sitkvians disappear once more into the shadows. The humans and the recently reintroduced four are hidden by the Rebels, and enlisted into their military. The rebels’ power grows with the addition of several new super weapons, and soon they take Gertragia from the loyalists, but not without much bloodshed. No word is heard from the Sitkvians for some time. Gertragia slowly rebuilds itself with a new, parliamentary-like government. The smoldering remains of the royal castle are torn down, and a new center of government is made in the capital city, one where the people have much more of a say. It seems things are settling down for the humans. They’re given quarters in which to live and treated almost as normal citizens, if not war heroes. Then the Siktvians return. A ship appears in the sky, streamlined and unthreatening looking. A message booms out of an unseen speaker. The message? A demand for the humans to be given to the Sitkvians. Immediately, or there will be harsh consequences. The previous rebel leader and now prime minister makes a snap decision to keep the humans away from the Sitkvians. Gertragia is bombarded with hagar waves, robotic soldiers descend to the planet and begin slaughtering whoever happens to cross their path. The soldiers scour the planet searching for the humans, but are so thorough that not much progress is made. This goes on for only a few days before the prime minister contacts the ship and states that he’ll give them the humans. He/She uses the tracking devices to locate the humans, who have all fled southward to the deepest jungles and sparsest villages of the planet. Soldiers are sent to capture the humans. They are successful, as the humans’ powers are rendered null by the hagar field surrounding the planet. Just as the humans are about to be handed over to the waiting Sitkvian vessel, another larger ship flies across the sky and sends the Sitkvian vessel crashing earthwards. The ship looks old and beaten up, but with several unseen extremely powerful weapons. The ship’s captain calmly and cordially requests an audience with the stunned prime minister. The audience is, of course, granted. The ship docks and the audience is held. To the shock of in seeing-distance, what comes off the ship is young human, who is seemingly immune to hagar radiation. The captain explains that she’d/he’d require the remaining members of their species back, and that they’d have to dock on the planet for a couple of days. The prime minister simply agrees, not wanting anymore trouble. The original humans are informed of this development. Most are curious, a few are cautious. But most like the idea of being with their kind once more. They are sent to the ship, and the captain gives them a sort of orientation. She/he explains that she/he and the few dozen humans aboard the ship came from another planet that was very near to the Sitkvian home planet and almost as advanced. She/he also explains that their planet had been ravaged by Evoknights too, but because they were more ready, more humans had survived. She/he tells them that all of the humans aboard the ship are the second generation of survivors, and that it was their parents who had escaped the Evoknights. Finally, the captain tells them that for their entire lives their quest has been to find a home planet. She/he expects the humans to empathize with that goal, and to aid them with it. Gertragia would be the perfect place to settle, she/he says, and it would be easy to take over seeing as its new government is just in its first reaches of life. Some of the humans are made uneasy by this. But the captain continues, saying that the original humans would either be with them or against them in this fight, and she/he assures them that the Sitkvians would still be trying to get their claws on them. The captain then releases the slightly disgruntled humans back onto the planet to take care of any business before they were to re-board the ship and take off to a small moon to prepare for war. The humans deliberate on what to do somewhat morosely. Either fight their brethren or ruthlessly take over a planet that just witnessed a somewhat inspiring revelation. The humans are divided. Some choose to take over Gertragia, others decide against it and don’t choose to get back onboard the ship the next evening. The ones that don’t go with the other humans tell the people of Gertragia about the other humans’ plans, and Gertragia immediately seeks the help of its allies (IDK what planets those would be).
The humans that do decide to fight prepare for battle, already knowing that unless Gertragia gets some serious help that they’ll win. The fight commences. It’s a pretty goshdarned great one, with lots of explosions and stuff. And that’s about it. There’s more to add… But really, does it need to be LONGER?! Also, one of the humans that went with the other humans would have to become a turncoat in order for the Gertragians/humans to win. :\
I'm sorry if it's hard to read, I typed it in word. EDIT: And for clarity, I don't care if the whole thing is scrapped.
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| | | Deus Dormio
Posts : 795 Join date : 2010-06-25 Age : 28 Location : I reside alone on the faraway planet Dormio. It is mine and mine only. Whatever citizens live there are nonsentient lizards.
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 8:54 pm | |
| Kiwi, I can't read any of that. XD
Also, I really don't see why you're getting all angry about this. Since the only "lie" you're talking about (and unfortunately I remember what you're talking about) is the two year timeskip. Which isn't a big deal at all.
And in your own post you said you didn't ask anyone about it. I don't know if Rambo forgot or not, but he's not the only member of the site. So your whole "nobody knew but Member and Kiwi" thing is a little silly. | |
| | | kiwiattack
Posts : 512 Join date : 2010-06-26 Age : 27 Location : @ the combination pizza hut & taco bell
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 8:58 pm | |
| wtffff Idk why it made it dark colored
WAIT I FIXED IT | |
| | | Deus Dormio
Posts : 795 Join date : 2010-06-25 Age : 28 Location : I reside alone on the faraway planet Dormio. It is mine and mine only. Whatever citizens live there are nonsentient lizards.
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:05 pm | |
| Okay good.
Well, anyways. As much as this conversation is a joy to all of us, I'm kind of getting tired of it. So here's the thing Rook.
EVERYTHING YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT DOESN'T MEAN SHIT ANYMORE.
See, I had to make that big so you didn't accidentally skip over it in a fit of betrayed rage.
And to add to that: WE'VE BOTH ALREADY SAID WE DON'T CARE WHAT YOU DO SO GO MAKE THE PLOT LIKE YOU'VE ALREADY BEEN DOING.
Please remember this underlined part while deciding your rebuttal.
Now that I've hopefully made this clear you can talk it over with Kyuberts and Snick and tell us when you're done.
Thnx. | |
| | | Rookie
Posts : 373 Join date : 2010-09-22 Age : 111
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:08 pm | |
| Okay, I didn't read the last two posts. For fucks sake, you two are still missing the point. Let's let it go and make progress. And you don't have to bold your damn text. I'm not a stupid five year old. I can understand regular text. | |
| | | kiwiattack
Posts : 512 Join date : 2010-06-26 Age : 27 Location : @ the combination pizza hut & taco bell
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:18 pm | |
| "Okay, I didn't read the last two posts."
Really dude? I apologized (SORT OF), and I tried to clear things up. I'm sort of trying to be considerate.
There's not going to be any progress if you're going to accuse me of things I don't believe I did, then blow me off when I try to reconcile. Sorry. | |
| | | Deus Dormio
Posts : 795 Join date : 2010-06-25 Age : 28 Location : I reside alone on the faraway planet Dormio. It is mine and mine only. Whatever citizens live there are nonsentient lizards.
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:20 pm | |
| Yeah...
Also, I kind of don't want to have a discussion on two separate sites, especially if half the time you're going to be accusing me of rejecting all of your ideas and "flipping shit".
And believe me, the large text was needed. | |
| | | Rookie
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:26 pm | |
| I would've read it if it was regular size. You two must think I'm a dumbass if that kind of text was 'needed.'
And for the billionth time, fucking let it go. Old plot or new plot? | |
| | | kiwiattack
Posts : 512 Join date : 2010-06-26 Age : 27 Location : @ the combination pizza hut & taco bell
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:32 pm | |
| I unbolded just 4 u
I don't care. Old plot would save time, but if it doesn't work then new plot is okay. | |
| | | Deus Dormio
Posts : 795 Join date : 2010-06-25 Age : 28 Location : I reside alone on the faraway planet Dormio. It is mine and mine only. Whatever citizens live there are nonsentient lizards.
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:34 pm | |
| I'm not sure what I'm supposed to let go since I'm not clinging onto anything. Well maybe the fact that I don't want to participate in a dysfunctional discussion.
Anyways, as the big text said, do whatever you want. We don't care. Pick the old plot or start a new plot if you want to. I'd rather have a new plot since this one obviously sucks and doesn't work. | |
| | | Rookie
Posts : 373 Join date : 2010-09-22 Age : 111
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:42 pm | |
| You're refusing to let go of the argument. :I
The old plot sucks. To my understanding, 95% of it will take place in a lab, which is exactly why I said it should be a sub-plot when I came up with it.
So back to my first post on here... Eva can go to and from a parallel universe and crap. We might be able to make a plot out of that. Yay or nay? | |
| | | Deus Dormio
Posts : 795 Join date : 2010-06-25 Age : 28 Location : I reside alone on the faraway planet Dormio. It is mine and mine only. Whatever citizens live there are nonsentient lizards.
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:47 pm | |
| I feel like if you're going to go to an entirely new universe, you might as well just start over with a completely new plot, but yeah sure. That's fine. | |
| | | kiwiattack
Posts : 512 Join date : 2010-06-26 Age : 27 Location : @ the combination pizza hut & taco bell
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:48 pm | |
| No. XI It doesn't, actually. Most of it takes place on Gertragia. Since we're actually talking about this now you should probably read the whole thing even though it's too long.
What would happen on the parallel universe? | |
| | | Rookie
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:49 pm | |
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| | | kiwiattack
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:50 pm | |
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| | | Rookie
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:52 pm | |
| Fistbumps of mass destruction. | |
| | | Deus Dormio
Posts : 795 Join date : 2010-06-25 Age : 28 Location : I reside alone on the faraway planet Dormio. It is mine and mine only. Whatever citizens live there are nonsentient lizards.
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:52 pm | |
| Maybe you and Snick and Kyuberts should talk something over than hopefully doesn't immediately turn into some intergalactic battle.
Also, I kind of like my alien characters. So when a new universe comes in, I'm just supposed to say "Oh sorry, you're dead now"? | |
| | | Rookie
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:57 pm | |
| Eva can only take one person at a time, and have you ever heard of sub-plots?
And no, I'm tired of war crap. | |
| | | kiwiattack
Posts : 512 Join date : 2010-06-26 Age : 27 Location : @ the combination pizza hut & taco bell
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 9:59 pm | |
| But what about a MAIN plot??? | |
| | | Rookie
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 10:06 pm | |
| I don't know. It's been a long day. And I'm pretty sure you guys can make a better plot than I can. | |
| | | Snicker Muffin
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Sun May 27, 2012 11:26 pm | |
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| | | Deus Dormio
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Mon May 28, 2012 9:09 am | |
| No, Rook, no. I refuse to make another plot. I've done it once already and it got me the previous pages of the thread. You and Snick and Kyuberts can start putting forth ideas, I'm sure you can do it. You guys wanted to revive it, so this is a good way to take charge and all that so and such. Everything can be exactly like you want it, I'll just come back when the rollercoaster is finished.
You can have Kiwi help if she wants to help, but I'm going to sit this one out. | |
| | | kiwiattack
Posts : 512 Join date : 2010-06-26 Age : 27 Location : @ the combination pizza hut & taco bell
| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Mon May 28, 2012 1:07 pm | |
| I wanted to help but my last plot was godawful according to everyone. And besides, I'm a lying bitch anyway so I'd probably just do something to piss you off. :E
Nah. You guys got this. You've been discussing it on your own already and are doing fine, so I'mma just step off.
And I am sorry to hear that snick | |
| | | Rookie
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| Subject: Re: HAY!!!! Mon May 28, 2012 2:14 pm | |
| Well, you all know I'm crap with plots. It doesn't matter if I put effort into it or not, it's still gonna suck. And I already told you fools, we talked about it for maybe five minutes then moved on. No one's really been discussing it. | |
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